Anyone want to rip this show apart for me?

[gabe]

Hey guys, anyone want to rip this show apart and give me some feedback?



1:49 could be improved, it was a last min decision, I was lost on that part for a while
The ending I think could be better, it was another thing I was lost on for ideas.

Show made in moncha, running at 12kpps
Projector is x-laser mobile beat mk4 RGB (450mW)

Thanks!

[Bradfo69]

Looks great to me but, I don't know all the little nuances and tiny things to look for that others might. Quite honestly, art is subjective. My feeling is, if YOU enjoy it, then it really doesn't matter what we think. It's a good show. I'd pay for it. And... I even have Moncha to play it on.

[gabe]

It's a good show. I'd pay for it.

I'll give you a deal!
Haha, but thanks!

[Bradfo69]

Content has recently become nearly as addictive as the equipment to play it on! I'm always on the lookout for finding or buying good stuff.

[Fenechlaser]

One of the funkiest show's I've ever seen, I really like the soundtrack/song you chose. Like Bradfo69 said, art is subjective, but I think you managed to make a very good show Any chance you'll be posting the ild file?? :P

[WookieBoy]

Hey Gabe.

I like it! :-)

Thought you synced it to the music nicely and loved the 'mirrored' effects.
Think I'll echo the above thoughts of 'any chance of the ild file' so I can see how you programmed it? ;-)

[norty303]

I quite liked what I saw of the show, but I didn't make a minute before I had to turn the noise off!

[gabe]

If you guys message me i'll send you the show file!

[Stoney3K]

Now I'm personally not a very big fan of beam shows and dubstep music (I'm more into graphics and theatrical shows), but I have to say I did enjoy it. In particular, I liked the idea of projecting the 'piano keys' on the synth solo parts.

I do feel sorry for your camera chip though.

[eighty8]

Very cool. I like how you switch patterns as often as you do. I could see this same approach done with 'eye of the tiger'.